Great intro and conclusion Luke. Well done in summarising it down

Hi Natalee
I’ve finished the sentence and attached draft below, keep it short! I labelled in v2 to try and avoid the trouble you had with it reverting to the original.
All good,
H

Hi All,

Further to Natalee’s posts above and Skype message just now.

I’ve read through the current draft and propose the following for an intro and outro as we discussed earlier via Skype. I’ve designed the […]

Weird…. the post keep attaching those two docs and everytime I tried deleting it and replacing it with the ‘right’ doc, it just revert back to those two docs. Anyway, please disregards the previous post and […]

Hi Howard,
I have incorporated Native title and your points on two chamber governance and non-territorial federalism into the essay – highlighted in blue.
You do need to finish the sentence on those two points t […]

attached my political contribution

Hi All,
As discussed on Skype.
NQ

Hi All,

I have attached my contribution for the ecology component and have compiled all PEEMC contributions into one collective document, also attached. Bibliography includes all contributions too. Currently at […]

Here’s my revised draft too 🙂

Totally agree Carole. I just added in a sentence about cultural education being each States responsibility. Here’s my revised draft

Dear peace fellows,

Please find attached my contribution for political therapy. As always, feel free to share thoughts to modify / expand / add on political therapy as deemed fit.

On the template – I have […]

Hello Laura, great! I will be there.

Hi gang, just chatting to Luke and Howard, we’re going to have a brief Skype at 6pm AEST tomorrow to nominate some collation and smooth out any areas of contention. If we could get at least one delegate from each […]

Hi Carole, thanks for your feedback! Really good points and I’ll seek to clarify the areas you have specified. I think you’re right about Russia upon a little more research I did today so I’ll have a rethink. […]

Dear Niamh,

I just read your part. Great ideas! As there are several instances of discrimination based on origin, I would personally emphasise a little more on the need of each African State (not only people) […]

Dear Laura and Marie-Louise,

Your thoughts on military are very interesting. I totally agree with you on the importance of control arms import and export.

However, I am a bit skeptical about the need for […]

Hi guys,
Find attached my submission on Culture. Happy reading!

Weird! Sorry I don’t know why it attached those readings to my comment?! Disregard them, weird glitch in my laptop maybe?