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Luke Hartley replied to the forum topic Collective Assignment 1 in the group University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Hi Liam,
I’ve polished up my earlier thought below if it helps you to drop into your draft.
The UK’s vote in December 2015 to continue Syrian airstrike support signified a missed opportunity to break w […]
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Liam replied to the forum topic Collective Assignment 1 in the group University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Nice work Natalee. I’ve got the final draft in front of me now. Do you want to work in that or send me something to drop in to the draft?
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NataleeQ replied to the topic Collective Assignment 1 in the forum University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Hi @Carole Berrih,
I hope it’s not too late. I just checked the forum. Laura and I have been in contact during the past few days working on our paper, and finally get to really enjoy the holiday today.
I just went through a crash course in our paper-DPT-related-issues on UK. It seems that we could use Luke’s input for military and politics…[Read more] -
NataleeQ replied to the forum topic Collective Assignment 1 in the group University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Hi @Carole Berrih,
I hope it’s not too late. I just checked the forum. Laura and I have been in contact during the past few days working on our paper, and finally get to really enjoy the holiday today.
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Luke Hartley replied to the forum topic Collective Assignment 1 in the group University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Hi Carole and Liam,
I’ve attached edits I made in the document Carole posted earlier. I focused on the Intro and Conclusion, please take or leave as you judge best, I’m not precious about the final content, […]
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Carole Berrih replied to the forum topic Collective Assignment 1 in the group University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Hello Liam, sorry I had not seen your message.
Great if you have some time to work on a few additional ideas!
Thanks
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Carole Berrih replied to the forum topic Collective Assignment 1 in the group University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Hello Luke, thank you so much for your quick reply and your support in finalising the assignment.
I understand that you have been disappointed with the group work. It is our first collective assignment, so for […]
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Liam replied to the forum topic Collective Assignment 1 in the group University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Luke – I think you’ve hit some of the key issues right there! Let me have a crack at doing a quick UK outline along those lines (..and we’ll label as having been assembled by the group in the absence of a […]
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Luke Hartley replied to the forum topic Collective Assignment 1 in the group University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Hi Carole,
Admittedly, I know nothing about the UK in this context. Rather than hastily hash something together could we opt out of including the UK given the team who self-assigned this responsibility haven’t […]
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Carole Berrih replied to the forum topic Collective Assignment 1 in the group University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Dear all,
Following my earlier message, please find attached the non-finalized assignment. We are already at 5 full pages, without the UK.
@Liam, Niamh had already worked a bit on the introduction. […]
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Carole Berrih replied to the forum topic Collective Assignment 1 in the group University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Hello to all of you!
We have not received the UK submission so far and we need to produce the document before the end of the day WET.
We do not have much space left for the UK submission anyway… Niamh […]
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Carole Berrih replied to the forum topic Collective Assignment 1 in the group University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Hello Luke,
Thanks for taking my point into consideration and for your additional explanations. I definetely agree with you on the expansion of colonies in territories (incompatible), but I think it also […]
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Luke Hartley replied to the forum topic Collective Assignment 1 in the group University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Hi Carole,
Yes, I agree with your observation that the Israeli state and Jewish/Judaic faith being two different concepts. The wording in my initial draft was more a point for discussion than a firm […]
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Luke Hartley replied to the forum topic Collective Assignment 1 in the group University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Hi Carole & Niamh,
Please find my contribution on Israel below. Double-spaced on regular A4 it comes in at one and a quarter pages and this is what we previously agreed on, unless this agreement changed. I am […]
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Liam posted an update in the group University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Hi all – I’ve had a stab at an intro which explains (I hope) our emphasis on remedies (over analysis and forecasts) as well as inviting plenty of feedback given this our first real crack at engaging this method. See what you reckon. Cheers all, Liam
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Liam replied to the topic Collective Assignment 1 in the forum University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Thanks Carole, thanks all. Coming together nicely. I’m thinking if we haven’t got a UK entry by tomorrow morning Central European Time we could knock up a very basic section on Britain which we and the others could then flesh out as we receive feedback from Naakow/Keil ahead of the professor’s formal reply on 1-2 April. I think giving the overall…[Read more]
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Liam replied to the forum topic Collective Assignment 1 in the group University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Thanks Carole, thanks all. Coming together nicely. I’m thinking if we haven’t got a UK entry by tomorrow morning Central European Time we could knock up a very basic section on Britain which we and the others […]
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Carole Berrih replied to the topic Collective Assignment 1 in the forum University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Dear all,
I copied/pasted each section that we have so far in the etherpad so that you could all have a look. I added a small conclusion, based on what cross-cutting patterns we could find between the countries. Please could you check whether this is working for you?
FYI, we are still missing:
– a small introduction
– the section on UK
– editing…[Read more] -
Carole Berrih replied to the forum topic Collective Assignment 1 in the group University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Dear all,
I copied/pasted each section that we have so far in the etherpad so that you could all have a look. I added a small conclusion, based on what cross-cutting patterns we could find between the […]
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Carole Berrih replied to the forum topic Collective Assignment 1 in the group University of Sydney Students ACT-class of 2016 8 years, 8 months ago
Thanks a lot Luke for your work! I may disagree on something though. I feel that there may be a confusion between Israel as a country and Jews as people. You mention that Hebraic faith identifies Israel as chosen […]
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Hi Liam,
Could you send me the intro that you’ve drafted and I’ll pop it into the document I have so far?
Cheers,
Niamh